shawna_miller

I like the pose - but a little too much soft-focus going on for my taste. 

I personally do not like how her feet and ankles are cut off at such a weird spot - but - the lighting on her face is really interesting (in a good way)

The lighting is so dynamic in this shot.  Its a wee bit grainy - but - other than that, I like it.

I love the lighting in this.  I really like how the shadows really define her body tone -

I love, love, LOVE, how gritty this is.  His actual eyes are little hard to see - are those eyelashes? I would play with the lighting a little bit more. 

My personal opinion is that it's too dark.  A little more "flirty" lighting would be nice.

This is my first time having a photo critiqued. Tell me what'cha

think. Thanks!