hoolyd1

Wow this is sort of creepy at first glance and at a closer look I still do not know what it is. great light and the focus is at just the right spot!

Thank You I needed a laugh. This is seriously funny stuff!

My first thought is I would like at least one person more clear. I keep going to the person in the red leather jacket and wishing I could see more. I'm not sure your intent here. So I guess as an art piece it works, I keep looking at it and it has a flow. As a fashion piece it falls short, I can't distinguish any specific fashion, but I really like where you are going with this keep experimenting.

I think Willie has a valid opinion, but I see the image in a different way. I believe the flow of the fabric is what makes the emotion of the image. It gives a feeling and helps me connect with the image. Something that is otherwise often achieved through the eyes of the model. Is she being pulled towards the light or falling away? My only real suggestion for improvement would be to work on the magenta halo. I like the hint of color, but it feels too consistant to be natural, maybe play a bit with the density and opacity as it falls around the fabric. Overall I really like that the image makes me feel.

love the photo, try cropping just above the bottom of the shirt, it makes ie so much stronger