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Hi David,

 

I like the Pose and the lighting works here too. I have a question about the soft focus. It might be my eyes or my monitor but it appears the models legs are softer then her arms, it is kind of distracting. Is it just me? I really like the image otherwise.

I'm not overly happy with this pose. Maybe I'm being a little hard

on the image but I don't care for the way the males legs show to the

right of the photo. What do you think?

I really like this one. I dont find the background to bright or even blown out. Its perfect. The background lighting really brings the model to the fore front. Her eyes and smile are beautifully captured. Well done!

Great Suggestion! Thanks!

Constructive Comments appreciated!

Good Observation! Thanks!

I can't put my finger on it. There's something about the shadow around her eyes that distracts me. Very good photo though. One of my favorites you've taken

James,

 

This has a lot of potential. The lighting is great. Just two things bother me about this photo. I find the background distracting, and there seems to be something sticking out of the top of the models head. You're doing great! Keep at it!

The lighting is really good. I love how you captured the eyes!

Any constructive thoughts are appreciated

I think I'd crop this a little more. If you get a chance to re take this have her look at the camera. I think if I could see her eyes it would be a lot better.

Ok this is with a square crop. Does it still appear green? I removed the gif and replaced it with a jpg. I dont see the green. Maybe my monitor is out of calibration...anyone?