mdmathson

Wonderful image, I was wondering about the end of the snake's tongue, but i think the motion blur is good.

This is a striking image, beautiful lines. symmetry is marvelous. contrasts and compares the male and female forms with a slight amount of tension. very pleasing image.

Unusual forms, but quite a compelling image. Good work.

Wonderful image!!

Another nice image. The lines of the figure are very elegant. I like the negative space, I'm not sure if reducing that space would maintain the same ambience of the image.

Medium format, Pentax 67, Ilford b&w iso 400 film, orange filter, scanned negative,

slightly cropped

The light on this figure is much more gentle. The structure ofe the body and the surface contours are well defined. a little more light on the abdomen area and use of a reflecting surface on the back would be nice. You have a great sense of effective posing of the figure.

 

MD

This is a very good self portrait. Interesting pose. I think it could be improved if the highlights were less intense, less exposure. Bright directional light on the nude figure can be very effective but can be a challenge to control. I encourage you to continue with this genre of work

MD

 

Taken a few years ago, found a role of undeveloped film in darkroom!

Fine composition. Wonderful color. Beautiful image of a subject of great benefit (relief of pan) and o potential harm (addiction) to man.

This image was made near Sequoia Nat Park in California, late morning, rather intense

natural lighting. The image was dodged slightly in a couple areas; the boulder behind

the model and the large dark boulder in front of the model.

Very interesting image. Beautiful form, nice visual contrast between the curves of the nude and the straight lines. I like the"glow" of the body. Beautiful form. Wonder if image would be improved if no tan lies?

My first submission to this site