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xposure

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    A good pose for the model and I agree with all the above, plus the image requires a little more dof as the thigh is slightly out of focus, a mistake easy to make, the lighting captures good shadows from the body. Another note is that the image itself if it was converted to B&W has grained a little too much and lost the smooth texture of the skin, try to reduce the blue to remove this, lastly a few other specks take my eye away from the subject. I have taken just 5 minutes to play with the image to show you what I mean, I hope you don't mind, due to the quality of the optimised image the results are far from perfect but it gives you an idea.

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    Framed

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    Very origianal, so much so, that when viewing the thumbs for this critique gallery this was the only shot that took my interest. The image I feel needs a touch more contrast or keytone as the black & white frame is taking away the concentration from the figure. I'm sure you experimented with it, was the shot not so good without the colourisation of the tattoo's? I would be interested to see as I don't think it needs it. All in all one of the most creative shots I've seen here, well done.
  1. In this small series of nudes, I think by far the best are the first and this one, in both, the boxes work well and I think if you had concentrated the box around the model on this shot like you did with the first it would equal the series as a nice group of portraits, the lighting is slighty harsh but gives good texture to the cloth. All in all nice to see some origianal nudes for a change.

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    A very nice composure, I think if you could have used a flash fill to light the gorgoian fan the details would have worked well and enhanced the picture a little more.
  2. I understand all the comments regarding the briefs, however the lines created by the underwear create and additional shadow ad lies that would not otherwise be there, it is also a focal point for where the model is looking. I remember the shoot well and find this is a good example from the days work. It would look good in B&W too.
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