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nothing special but I hope you like it

many thanks for looking, please have a look at the two others as well.

As usual, comments are welcome

but never the less perhaps a bit different (was an unusual windy night)

Thanks for comments....

but perhaps a little bit different.... this shot is my favorite of the

three I've published. Any other opinions?? As usual any comments are

welcome. Thanks for taking time to view.

I like it, good job (and to be honest more then the other shots mentioned

int the critiques). Never the less I would have rotated it, so that the boat

is aligned to the borders of the picture.

Hi Gary,

 

as you I think the second attempt is better (in regards to the camera and the light). But I'm not so sure about the shirt. Might be that it deflect the essential. Perhaps a dark or a black shirt could be better. As well I'm not so sure that it would be a better photo if you shave first (I assume you wouldn't use it to apply for a job ;-) )

 

just my two cents...

 

Regards

Sebastian

Hi Gary,

 

many thanks for the detailed description of what you've done. Many people forget about that - seems more seeking for (good) ratings then for sharing ideas with others. Please let us know if you solved the problem to place a flash in a flim SLR.

Personaly I like the results of this "experiment". Never the less I have the feeling that your glasses distract the results a little bit as the light is focused.... Don't get me wrong, I'm not complaining about glasses (I need to wear glasses as well) just the effect the glasses have in the picture.

 

Regards

Sebastian

 

by now the photo is marked as unmanipulated..... so it's a camera of a dwarf or the ammo belongs to a gun of a giant ???

great idea (combination of old and new) and a exiting perspective. But the sky (??) in the archs of the old building are distructing me a little bit. This looks to artificial to me. Never the less, a great photo.

I like the idea but the photo doesn't convince me 100% (don't know why, perhaps because I'm not sure of the major subject. Is it the pole in the foreground or the white ladder in the back??

nice work, I like it - never the less some points (just my personel opinions!!!)

somehow the shadow of the pole on the hovle is deranging me (hope that's the right word!!!). I understand why it's there - also in terms of composition - but it some how doesn't fit.

Wonder if the view could be better if the hovle wouldn' be in the center but more at the edge.

As said, just my two cents.

any comments and ratings are welcome... many thanks (BTW somehow it's

abstract but somehow it's not, so please don't complain about the

category ;-) )

bw version of a color negative