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  1. Great colour and compositional balance in this shot. The juxtaposition between the painting and nude is extremely well done, although I would have had the nude on her side a little to better reflect the pose in the painting. Great work :)

    Boudoir

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    Thanks Jonathan.

     

    I think it's am matter of technique in Photoshop as my method (using quick mask and creating levels layers based on those selections) leaves me with some hard edges I can't seem to lose. I have a book in the cupboard on Photoshop for Photographers, perhaps it's about time I got it out and gave it a good read after all.

     

    Attached is my version, which took me about 10-15 minutes, seemingly too long :o(

     

    PS> I should mention I didn't boost her top body/face as much as you as I wanted to keep a little more contrast.

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    Boudoir

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    @Jonathan: Thanks for your comment, suggestion, and example - it certainly is an improvement on the original. Do you have a suggested resources on creating a low-key such as you have done? My quick attempts in Photoshop seem to lack the same punchy contrast you've achieved?
  2. Wonderful lighting and tonal quality, the shot also carries a strange but fascinating element of anonymity. I may have been tempted to create more negative space to the left, shifting her to the right, but otherwise great :)

    Boudoir

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    Barry:
    Thanks for the feedback.

    I agree entirely with your sentiments regarding the technical aspects of the shot, I hesitated in posting it. It was an 'end of the film' moment after returning to our hotel room; unfortunately with available light I had to push an already 400 ISO film despite being fully open @ f/1.4.

    On reflection it's more a personal portrait, and given the technical constraints, perhaps one better left in the library :)

    Sunny Days

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    Jonathan/Barry: Thank you both for your kind comments.

    Jonathan: I'm now making more efforts to increase my profile on photo.net and generally get more photography done, hopefully you'll see lots more as we move into 2009. Thank you for your continued support :)

    Naked Oasis

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    Jim:
    Many thanks for your comments.

    I appreciate your point about the sky, you are right that it distracts from the model. I feel to omit the sky entirely may have made the shot lack balance, although agree that if the sky was darker it would help enormously, perhaps through the use of a polarizing filter or similar?

    The shot was taken at a rented villa in Vers Pont du Gard (South of France), both beautiful and secluded :)

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