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fred-tixier

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    Tied wings

          7

    I like.

     

    Some details can be revised for me :

     

    Hard shadow at the model right eye corner could be lightened.

    Light spot beetween model arms ( gorge ) coul be taken away.

    Transition beetween dark and clear light on model right arm could be softer.

     

    In any case it is a very good picture.

    Untitled

          2

    I'm sorry but I deliver you a 3/3.

    I'm also sure that real view was beautiful and that you try to capture it.

    Moon is really centered and really small and we cannot see any details, it's only a white spot on a black surface.

     

    I'm not sure that your digital camera is able to help you for to improve this kind of picture but I see that you live in Tabriz and you will surely find subject that will enjoy us.

     

    Regards.

    Lady Cristina

          3

    Cross processing and composition have been well done.

    If women had walked to the pier, effect would have improved, I think, because she seems to be hitting very soon image verge.

    Untitled

          5

    Intriguing is a small word.

    I don't have any idea about rates I will give. Object seems to be too dark but I'm sure that mystery is a crucial "Untitled image" component.

     

    Finally I decided for 7/7 but as prize I want to eat that strawberry.

     

     

     

    Fall

          4

    It works for me.

     

    You frame is essential to boost the thin city line and I love big sky particularly when clouds an light paint it.

     

    Regards.

    Untitled

          3

    Nice composition of a blue and white world.

     

    It seems that image tilts down to the right : due to this tilting, you loose summit majesty.

     

    Regards.

  1. Sky is magnificent. Composition works good, but I would have prefered to see it without house roof on foreground.

     

    I don't speak about colors and light because I don't like HDR effects.

     

    Regards.

     

     

     

    life

          6

    Great colors ; arrangement has been well worked.

     

    A good picture.

     

    P.S If it's a crop, it could be fine to have a bit more space on the left

    ( upper poppy has been cutted )

    subway 2

          7

    Superb BW processing.

    Person on the right is a bit too dark for me ( skin and clothes was not simple to manage to be more noticeable, I'm sure )

    27-05-07 #4

          6

    double 7 for me.

     

    I like very much that light and mood.

     

    I tryed to have this kinf of light on one of mine desert picture, but your management is better.

     

    For to chaffer the centered pool is a bit interfering but it's not prominent.

     

     

    Innocence.

          3

    Frode, your absolutly right. Aahaah, it's easier to see a small white pixel on stranger's picture than to see an enormous dark and magenta area on mine. ;-)

     

    I will try to clone it out.

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