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dzikie_wino

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  1. Otto... Thank you for your comment but either you are new to photography or you have to adjust LCD.

     

    Composition is based on golden ratio. For you it can be undecided but I have decided to ante on antique rules. :]

    Miss Nobody

          12


    "Unusual

    The focus does make it interesting. I do have to say that I would prefer the focus to be on her face. It is a fine shot as is."

    First you write that it is unusual... later that the focus on the hand makes the photo interesting... but you still prefer focus to be where it "should" be...


    Why? To make it usual and uninteresting?


    I am not getting it.


    I have made quite a few variants of this photo with focus in different places. This one represents my way. :]


    Regards

    New simbol

          13

    Every time I browse through your gallery this photo stops me.

    I am truly devoted to it.

     

    The gradation of elements, concept, tonality scale, composition...

     

    7/7

     

    I have not tried Fomopan yet, is it worth to give it a chance?

    Rebecca

          7

    Beautifully done. She. And photo.

    But I find the composition a little [tiny?] unbalanced.

    If I could suggest any changes, it would be 6X7 central composition. [yes I know, I use  MF cameras to often :D :D :D]

    Then her body would twists to left upper corner and her face and sight would point to right upper corner.

    Aptly?

     

    http://avatars.zapodaj.net/images/aea839dce0c7.jpg

  2. Almost perfect.

    I appreciate the way you managed to photograph in such a hard lightning conditions.

    I love those lines.  Except one: shadow i left corner. I know it was hard to avoid it but it is minor distraction [at least for my one eye the other one is fully concentrated on theme ;)].

     

    6+

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