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peter emmett

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    Stones

          5
    I could look at this image for ages, there is a lot going on and yet the picture almost forces you to want to take time to slowly discover everything inside it. Brilliant shot.

    drop

          3
    This is a great shot. I've tried many time to get similar shot and failed, but this shot is so simple yet very pleasant to look at. Great work.

    Abstract Vents

          3

    I've recently become interested in taking some abstract images and so

    starting to shoot a few. This image is of air exhaust vents in our

    building with a tungsten white balance. I really like it's simplicity

    but is there something I could do to make it better with more impact?

    Cheers/Peter

  1. As everyone has mentioned the colors are wonderful and the focus is spot on. I like the way the back ground is way out of focus. The angle of the flowers also makes for an interesting photo. Well done.

     

    To improve the shot you could have:

    1. got closer to the flowers - the top left hand section has a nice line of flowers. These flowers seem very delicate and it would be great to see more of their delicacy in the picture. Also the flowers in the top right hand corner distract slightly from the main flowers.

    2. maybe moving around to the right a bit to show slightly more of the flowers would also be nice

     

    Flower

          9
    This is a great shot with loads of atmosphere. My only critique is that the flower was too dark and could be slightly more obvious - but not too much.
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