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thomasc

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    Untitled

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    Hello,

    indeed, this portrait miss some contrasts. You won't do something nice with post-processing, it's about the light you used.

     

    What matters is the skin whiteness. Actual fashion like to see pure white skin (not burned ofc). Here, the skin is more grey...If you only level the picture for a white skin, the hair will burn ;)

     

    Besides, your model's expression is too "neutral" for my tastes

     

    Anyway, it's a good picture, but you can do better for sure !

    Untitled

          2

    For me, the abdomens are a bit bright... The lighting is a bit strong. But it could be a style :)

    The right hand of the woman makes me uncomfortable...looks like a lack of space in the studio !

    I also see a very light shadow behind your male model. Maybe placing them differently could be better!

     

    Regards.

    Untitled

          2

    A very clean portrait, with a soft light. The work on the skin and the eyes is great and not fancy.

    Some little things annoy me :

    -The red marks on the little finger.

    -The background.

     

    I would have been pleased to see some smoke just over the cigarette ;)

     

    Nice work anyway, good shot :)

    Sandra S1B

          6

    Maybe this is too much?

    The skin, ok, but the eyes, seems a bit over-post-processed to me. The white in it (especially the one at the back) seems unreal and both are a bit oversharpened to me. Just my opinion though. The ear makes me a bit umconfortable.

    The up eyesbrows are a bit too smoothed huh ?

     

    Great work anyway !

    Hand of God

          9

    Pretty impressive and scarry meteo phenomenon !

    On a technical point of view, I regret the optical deformation of the lens. Maybe 15 feet in front of you, and the camera at the handrail level would have been perfect ! (just a suggestion)

     

    Nice capture, lucky (or not) to be here at the right moment.

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