nmcmahon

Hi Piotr,

Just took a look at your portfolio and am stunned. You've a very powerful body of work here. It's just that this image does not do it for me at all. Sorry to be a harsh criticism but I think it's missing something that is essential to the rest of your portfolio. I'm a painter/sculptor (most of the time. What I see when I look at this image is a man behind a sheet of latex giving no particular expression. It lacks tension, he is barely touching the skin let alone wrestling with it, as the title suggests and as your other works portray. I only say this because awareness of this tension is evident in your other works. This seems like a technique that you have to really be brave with, and I think you are more than capable. It's seems a lot of people have quite a different reaction to this piece though so I say this because I think it has more depth than you've reached with this attempt, and to encourage you to push it further.

Thanks