jacull

I may not be familiar with what historical / current event you are speaking of through this photo, but why are there empty shells along with the live rounds?

From an artistic perspective, this photo would be graphically stronger and more striking without the empty shells in it.

I like the idea. Experiment with different lighting to make this piece really pop.

David,

I love your subject. Absolutely interesting. Love the vignette. Here are a few things I might do to improve the frame:

- Sometimes it works, but I don't think having the subject in the center of the frame is effective for this shot. Move him off to the side.

- The crop on this shot seems strange. I would experiment with difffernt framing that maybe includes a bit more of the collar.

- More contrast would make it more interesting to me.

Overall a great shot, with great light on an interesting subject. Good work!

Jared

Great frame, Eduardo. The composition is very interesting. The only thing that bugs me is that it looks a little out of focused or motion blurred? Maybe that's just the small jpeg... I can't really tell. I like it, regardless.

- Jared

Mendel, this has a great "space-age city" feel.

Too bad about the reflection of the crane in the

building on left. If it were mine, I'd take that out

in Photoshop as I think it really takes away from the

overall feel. I'd also do a little correction to the

vertical lines so that they are perfectly straight.

Great work!

JC

Great Shot, Elena. Interesting composition, nice light.

The overall feeling of the shot is dark and ominous.

You could have increased this feeling (if that was your

goal) by using a higher angle looking down on the model,

rather than a low angle.

I like it,

JC