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    nice...I like the framing and the expoure but her hand in the front looks a little funny. It looks like she clawing towards you but her face is pretty passive. They don't work well together for me but everything else is cool (maybe a little darker in the shadows)
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    I like the expression but I would add more contrast. And, I don't know if this is cropped but I think the framing would be better if there was more space on the left...instead of the background on the right, you would see her elbow on the left and her face would be off center. I also might try brightening it up a bit (if you have it in raw, maybe an extra 1/2 stop or so in exposure).
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