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tomo sakai

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    Bags of Water

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    Critiques appreciated! I'm not sure about the color balance and

    brightness. Any suggestions?

     

    As an aside, between "still life" and "street photography", which is

    the more appropriate category? I did take this while walking the

    streets of Taiwan, but it doesn't exactly show a street scene. On

    the other hand, this was not arranged by me like most "still life"

    works are. Or "fine art"? But I'm not sure that it qualifies. Thanks!

    Cycle of Life

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    It's strangely grotesque (only because of the subject) yet beautiful at the same time. I don't think I would have taken the photo if I were there, but I'm glad you did. Nice job!

    Ghetto

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    Great composition. The cloudy overcast day is appropriate for the setting (ghetto). I'm nit picking, but that little thing sticking straight up from the roofline of the building on the left is slightly distracting. But then again, I'm not saying that I would want it edited out because it's all part of the scene as you saw it. Nice job!
  1. I like the composition, but I know the image could have been sharper

    (I should have used a smaller aperture) and contrast may be a little

    too strong (probably would have been better at another time of the

    day). Anyway, just wondering what others think. This is my first

    post. Thanks!

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