carla_f

Hello, thanks for looking.

Feedback is welcome.

This is not a portrait, its a commentary.... it doesn't work cropped into a headshot. Her legs and arms are deliberately mirroring what the carcass is doing, and the lighting suggests symmetry... the light spot below leads you to the light spot above, bringing the viewer around the frame.... why would I want to cut all that out?

With a tight crop there is much less to explore here, and the carcass (and the overall meaning here) is lost almost completely.

Not meaning to sound catty! I just feel pretty strongly about my work. :)

Nope, don't like Jims crop, I think he missed the point!

Part of a series I've been working on. View more at

www.carminafoto.com/unusual.html

Comments and feedback are welcome. Thanks for looking.

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Thoughts on this are appreciated :)

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Critiques are welcome... if you feel that this is a '3', please tell

me why.

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If anyone has the time or inclination to give a critique on this image

I would appreciate it.

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Hello, thoughts and feedback are appreciated.

If you feel this is 3 worthy, I would love to hear why.

Thanks for looking!!

Constructive criticism welcome, random 3's are not. Please back your

3's up with some verbal rationalization, if it is that bad, it is

worth explaining why.

Thanks for looking

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Wow, that looks like fun!

Good for you getting such a nice headshot :)

This one is a reject from a series I've been working on. The

reflection of the thing there is a happy accident.

Thoughts and opinions welcome. If you're going to leave a 3, I'd love

to know why... Feedback with words will help me improve.

I find the composition troublesome. A crop would help this alot. I would remove some of the dead space from above and behind her head.

Also, her shoulders look tense, her neck is bunched up (she should be long and lean) which accentuates her size more than she'd probably like. By moving above her more and shooting down, you'll get a more distinct chinline and disguise a thick neck.

Clever idea with the fern, but it dominates the image. Her expression here doesn't engage me.

Best of luck with future shoots!

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Critiques are appreciated!

Thanks for looking.

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Thank you very much, both of you. (I'm pretty sure the italian is saying happy things? Or else he's very excited about how bad it is! ;) )

I'm happy to see, I've got a lovely set of 3's on this one. I would love it if the maker of the pair of 3's would come forward and say what in particular is so distasteful about the shot. I can't improve by 3's alone!

Constructive criticism more than welcome.

Thanks for looking :)

Hello, any constructive comments regarding this image are welcome.

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Could this be classed as fine art? I have no idea.

Constructive criticism is welcome. Thanks very much for looking. :)