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I prefer this one much over the other one in this folder. FYI, it is not unusual in seashore areas

that women smoke. The cigarette that they smoke

is quite strong too. It is hand-rolled. :-p

the small black line on the left and bottom is quite distracting.

i think that you can crop it a bit.

 

tuan

thanks,

the color is a bit odd because it's daylight film

and it was used for indoor lighting.

that's why the color is shifted, i think.

perhaps, you should try to adjust the gamma down a little bit

and/or move the curve down a little

i guess that the flower is about .7 to 1 stop overexposed.

also, cropping the right side close to the dominantflower might help the photo some. :)

It's quite grainy. Did you do it on purpose?

Kodak Royal Gold should be smoother than this, right?

Yep, it looks better than the silly newspaper version. Good job on composition Russ.

--Tuan--

 

the stream color is a bit saturated.

is it because the film or long exposure?

 

IMHO, it could be better if you exposed your film a bit more and printed a bit longer to pull back the

details of highlight area.

did you use cross-processing for this?

Nice photo. Could you give more how it was done?

What lighting technique did you use?

Thanks.--Tuan

This was when they were testing different light settings during a rehearsal. I was lucky enough to get this photo with my E100SW. The real performance a few days later was quite different (the effect was less contrast like this).

Nice color!

The composition is quite inflexible though, IMHO.

A view from an angle to the boat perhaps better.

this is a really good example of how nikkor 80-200

IF AF-S lens should be used! :)

keep up the good work!

i think that the white stripe somehow distracts the overall effect.

 

tuan

you might want to use a high contrast filter for printing

#4 or #5 perhaps?

it works sometimes

close enlarging lens to the minimum aperture -1, -2 stop?

clean the lens?

try some these above

good luck!

tuan

ps: i did rate your photos (after reading the bio :-) )

the brightness might be a bit less, perhaps?

neat composition, impressive and richful color

very soulful!

Wow, this is like a painting. Good job!

Tuan

This is a great shot. You are probably the best

photojournalist right now. :-)

 

Thanks for sharing your work.

Tuan

Nice photo. The tone is quite odd though. Is

that because the film was out of date? I had

some similar effects like this when I tried Kodak

EktaPress 800 and Kodak 1600 (out of date).

Even I'm from VTech, I gotta admit that this is

a wonderful photo. :-)

I wonder what the photo would look like if you

stopped down like f16 or f22