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jim_norman4

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    The contrast is very effective. My preference would be to see the outlet and the lamp go. I find the lamp somewhat distracting and the outlet more so. I'd also knock down the drawer handle. Overall, a very fine image within a great portfolio.
  1. I think the lighting and tone are exceptional. The one item that distracts me is the tension in the model's neck. It seems to indicate a level of pain when coupled with the closed eyes. Otherwise, absolutely beautiful.
  2. I love the tonality and delicate nature of this shot. I would suggest cropping the right side a bit into the flesh so that there's a bit less arm to balance the left side. Otherwise, a beautiful, sensitve image. The arm surrounding the breast is a very effective compositional element.
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