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martydekkers

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    EXCELLENT!!! I really like this, especially because it's nothing I have ever seen before! Technique is flawless, and models are great! They don't seem to actually wrestle as much as they are getting started to wrestle, and that's the best point in time to take a photo. It's fun to see not-so-perfect bodies, and it's beautiful! The watches do affect the composition negatively, and I would have left them out, that's all that I can complain about.
  1. Yep, definitely better. I'm glad you didn't give up. That's how we learn! I guess making the penis less visible may appease some people :-) The shadows are better, but the pose is maybe a bit too uptight, holding in the stomach like that. Still, not bad!

    kid at work

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    Who says that composition and lighting does not matter in documentary photography? This is EXCELLENT! and does not need one word of text. "Kid at work" is a good title that says exactly what the photo shows. I love it, 7/7
  2. Great idea, and the colors are really good. But the composition needs a bit of work. The key lock is partly out of the frame, and somehow the photo has not been taken quite straight. I do like to see the screws behind the door handles, and the pull-sign is great too!

    tree love

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    I like the composition, because it's completely different from the conventional. Also, the model has a beautiful face, and is dressed, which is nice! I think that her face is maybe a bit overexposed.

    Arrival

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    I thought it was a girl... Maybe I'm wrong. Very nice photo, love the minimalistic effect, only the absolutely necessary, sends the message. B&W is so good!

    Marty

  3. Hi Lesa,

    Thanks for your nice comments on my photos. I think you are right: the more "daily" objects taken from a different perspective seem to be most interesting. I really love this one of yours! Nice portfolio in general.

    Cheers,

    Marty

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