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Ooh...  I love the enigma.

I like it a lot. I don't think the black border works. It is so black that it makes the actual photo look flat, lacking blacks. I'd remove that border and also look at the histogram to see if contrast should be added. Excellent lighting and texture. Might also make a great black&white.

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Nice soft light and interesting expression. Perfect contrast with a full range of tones.

Yes- it is definitely hot in here and all three of us are enjoying the mood...  The green adds a lot.

This photo has human interest and simple elements, simple composition- makes it powerful. No clutter or distractions. More of a tilted angle would make it more disturbing. Did you try a variety of angles, POV's?

Great sky and lighting. For greater depth and interest, it would've been nice to get in close by a foreground guitar/figure, while capturing the same background. Guitar neck between two figures is awkward. No center of interest. A bit cluttered. I would've positioned myself just beyond the black egg, to have the row of guitars on my right (great for depth) and the bridge to the left. 

Power lines are often an eye 'sore', but here they look like an elegant design. It helps that the lines flow in the same direction as the brightest clouds. Nice range of tones. Well done and original!  Well-balanced.

Maurizio, I like the unusual angle. The blue light from above adds an extra dimension. Beautiful face!

Thank you, Jose!

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Jerry, he has transformed the figure into a collection of simple shapes and smooth textures. Excellent composition!

Hi Giuliano. Nice color choices! Excellent series.

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Beautiful composition. I think the banding is an issue. I'd try adding a very small amount of noise (Filters) to eliminate the banding. Can you post the original?