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michael domino

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    Self-portrait.

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    Usually getting yourself in the picture spoils the result, but here I thought was the rare

    exception, since I'm hardly there, and the reflections of the facing windows could not be

    caught from any other angle.

  1. The steeple is very interesting and the composition is ok, but the brightness of the sky is distracting and the photograph is not sharp enough. With so many lines, a bit more sharpness would improve the impact of the photograph. The stair railings are really bad. They make the building look like something from a Tim Burton movie.

    Do Not Park

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    I can assure you that I took this picture. If you mean that I did not paint the lion on the wall, of course not. But, by your reasoning, no photographer's work is his or her own, since we are all capturing images that exist in the world and were created either by nature or the work of other people.
  2. The space is so tall that vertical lines can be seen to converge. If you rotate so that the windows are vertical the column on the left looks like it's about to fall over. I used the three columns in the center as a reference for a 5 degree clockwise rotation, which seemed also to make the streamers hang straight down.
  3. The boy on the left is also an important part of this picture, I'm glad you did not decide to crop him out. I also like the two different expressions on the girls' faces, the one on the right does not look like she's sure she likes this ride.

    Untitled

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    I would try cutting out the support poles on the right, but keep that bar holder on the right, and crop in a little on the left up to that vertical thing to the left of the guy standing there. Otherwise it's perfect. It could be a Wheaties box.
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