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    Lake

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    The two points of land at either side of the frame compete draw attention making a pretty successful tension that drags interest across a dramatic sky with an interesting distant horizon below.

     

    Note: the horizon seems tilted slightly low to the left though, and this should be fixed in PP. (I'm sensitive to horizons since being nailed onstage in a public critique, years ago: "It looks like the ocean will pour right out of the picture....")

  1. Hi, I like the concept of using the panorama in vertical format. This time the example does not seem to draw the eye to the intended subject, the small chapel cut into the forest on the hill. In fact I'm left uncertain what the subject is until I read the title.

     

    There seems to be extraneous detail that competes for attention, while the framing includes the roofs at the very bottom which drew my eyes, but didn't really add to the composition.

     

    I think I would go back another time with this result in mind and shoot when the light was more interesting and the sky was blue.

     

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  2. She is a lovely girl, with beautiful features and body, and the technical details are very good to excellent, her expression is a bit unhappy or contrived, either one, and the composition has her looking out of the frame. She seems cut off too much near her hips. I think if she was more to the left, or cropped more behind her it would be a stronger image.

     

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    Keep me tight

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    Strong, forced composition is not always successful, but works well here. Good tonal distinctions and variety, with the rope separate from the water, the concrete, the sky and the hull of the boat.

     

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    Untitled

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    Drawn in by the obvious attraction to a lovely girl, but the strong graphic qualities, with geometric elements gives more depth. The spot of color is not out of place, it adds more interest.

     

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    Untitled

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    Outstanding image. Love the orange hues. Lake Geneva has always been one of my favorite, most beautiful places, and this photo does not disappoint!

     

    The strip-print format for presentation is good, but the white bars outlining the photo, top and bottom, reduce the serenity of the shot and are very distracting. They take the aesthetic rating down 3 points!!! Alas.

     

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    Bolan II

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    Nice, sharp appearing and contrasty B+W. But the processing and burning of the sky and lower left corner detract from the image. The tonal values don't balance, in fact, in several parts of the image. These excessive effects don't aid this image.

     

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    crying

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    This is a fun shot. Nice red background, but I wish his head was turned slightly more forward.

     

    Looks like he's hollering for his mate or yakking about territory.

     

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    Green Snake

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    Nice. Looks like a 'green tree python'. They're not very friendly like some other pythons are, but are very cool looking.

     

    Nice background and good depth of field. I like the view of his/her eye, very cool!

     

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    Rhinos in the Mara

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    Really nice textures and it's great that you went with B+W for this shot. A very intimate shot of these animals.

     

    Unfortunate to have the weeds in foreground left + right; they are not effective to frame this shot. Maybe a tighter crop from this with less distracting elements?

     

    TenOx

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