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    Lady in Pink

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    This is a superb shot, and a testament to the importance of having a camera accessible at all times. In my opinion it is the best in your portfolio here at photo.net. plus the fact that it was taken in London really fits... this is the type of shot I wish I could have taken while I lived in Aberdeen - it really captures many of the days pretty well. It is a gray street, obviously overcast and raining, which is pretty common in the UK - BUT, the woman is wearing cheerful colors and although one can't see her face we can see "sunshine" and all the metaphors that represents - through her.

    Its a Big World

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    I have admired this image for quite some time now (along with many other images in your portfolio) and think this POW (photo of the week - not prisoner of war) is most deserving! You work with a darker and more monotone color palette than most people who use color film, and it gives a great signature to your work.

    Untitled

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    In gerneral i like the shot. but the polarization effect is (at least in my opinion) way too severe. Also, a perfectly blue sky isn't very interesting and at least in my opinion shouldn't be shown off too much (it works sometimes but not here). Thus, i propose cropping the image to a perfect square (see attached)...

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  1. I like the shot. These "dots of red" clearly are the place your eye goes to first, and since they are separated from one another i would think there should be more detail visible in each of them (most likely due to them being larger in the frame), especially the second from the right, or you could have a "sea of flowers" so the detail doesn't matter as much. Of course the detail might be there in the larger file...
  2. This photograph is superb, much like the rest of your first class portfolio. The intersecting diagonal lines of the clouds and the clothes lines lead you right to the monastery. I like it a lot. If i were to criticize something, and I need to look hard to do so, I would say that the polarizing affect on the sky is a tiny bit too strong... but this is a VERY minor point. Congratulations on a job well done.

    Autumn Leaf

          3
    I like it... were the leaves naturally like that. The first thing i thought until i read the title was "what creature is that"... those leaf, although technically dead is given life in this image because it looks like some exoctic insect.

    Bermuda Beach

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    In this photo, i think the focus should be on everything (use f-16 or something like that). I do think that the rocks are distracting. Both are, and it is not because they are there (they do frame the sea and make you feel secluded - which i would assume this picture is trying to convery), but because they take up so much of picture... My guess is that this photo would have been much better had you taken 3-4 steps to the left when you shot it (that way the rock out in tthe ocean wouldn't have been cut off by the rock on the right, the rocks wouldn't have been so big...

    Marisa at sunset

          4
    This is a good a portrait. The pose, amount and angle of light on the woman and look is great. It would probably help if the background were more uniform in color, a bit more out of focus, and were one of two things:
    • Either a uniform dark background - in which case there would need to be a bit more light on the woman to make her stand out. (this would probably be a bit better for B&W pictures)
    • Or, a lighter background.
    One other minor thing (which could likely be the result of scanning) - it would be nice to see more detail in the woman's hair on the right side of the picture. Overall, this is a good job (and a beautiful woman).
  3. The first thing that comes to mind here is that there is no sky... and i wish there were. You may need to use a polarizer or something else for B&W photography (i can't remember all my filters for that kind of work). Wait until there is an interesting sky and go reshoot.

    Untitled

          4
    Like you, I am caught by the almost abstract positions that the pelicans were getting in. This is a great photo. It took me a while to figure out that two birds are on the left and one on the right - at first it seemed as if the head of the closer one on the right belonged to the bird on the left which had a very convoluted neck and was pocking another bird (not poke itself which is actually the case). Lighting is good, composition is good, and there are only two things I could nit-pick. First, it seems like the background pelican on the left slightly out of focus (although this could be because of the scan), and the second is that I wish the very top of the photo were green like the grass leading up to it (it seems like you caught just a bit of a wall or something like that - its a bit dark up there)... these are VERY minor points however. Good job.
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