richard_hasty

September 24, 2003

My eye gets stuck on the guys left arm. I think it's a combinaiton of the placement regarding the rule of thirds and the high contrast between his arm and her hand. The combination of his arm and her hands makes it look too cluttered for a fashion ad, in my opinion.

I think either model could work separately, though his arm would still be pretty hot.

October 29, 2002

The "fractalness" of this image is stunning.

October 8, 2002

Cool. Reminds me of a coral reef. I would like for the petals to be more distinct near the bee.

October 8, 2002

I like the intensity of this guys gaze, and the feel of the shot. His shiny, sharp collar and blown out forhead don't do much for me.

October 3, 2002

My only complaint is that the angle of her body and the clothing make the dancer look rather thick around the middle.

I'm also surprised that the sky looks noisy. Is that from the scanning?

September 17, 2002

The line and brightness of the stone wall draw my eye to the lower left corner.

August 30, 2002

I was disappointed not to get a big enough picture to see the textures in this one or the ladder pic. Neat idea though.

August 30, 2002

The plants in the foreground don't really do anything for me. Too complicated. I like the clear subjects in many of your other landscapes, particularly the lone silhouetted tree.

August 29, 2002

I like the composition, and I like how the shadows from the top flowers make patterns on the lower flowers.

August 25, 2002

The bright light and the people silhoutted in the lower left look kind of busy. I like the woman walking away into the receding half arch type things.

August 24, 2002

I like this the best of your Philly folder, which is an interesting take on the city.

August 24, 2002

Great expression. Light and tones are very nice. The pose looks old somehow. Minor nit, the blade of grass in front of her right hand.

August 24, 2002

The composition works here, but I would prefer light tha revealed the shape better. The hard light has revealed hte texture thought, and I wouldn't want to lose that.