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nadejda krasteva

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    Karen

          3

    This works well as a snapshot, but for a real portrait some details need to be fixed:)

    Try not to centre the person you are photographying but placing him or her on either side.

    Zooming a bit more would also emphesize on her rather than the background that in my opinion is too much. In a portrait, the background even though important is not as significant as the person itself.

    And one last advice, don't cut the body where her knees are, either bellow or above them :))

    Overall a good first attempt:)

    James and Leslie

          5
    The lighting is ok but could have been much better with softer light. Also, the womans left arm looks cut off, so perhaps you would change the position. Its good that you can see a white spot in both of their eyes! good luck! :)

    Liz

          4
    a agree that you should have cropped less, but even this way it's not so bad. The lighting could have been softer and the triangle you have under the left eye should have been closer to the nose. Also there is too much shadow on the left cheek. If she would move a bit to the right, the triangle and the cheek shadow would both get fixed :))

    Red

          2
    its a good portrait, but there should have been more shadow on the girls face to make it look longer instead of round as it is and perhaps she should have turned another 10 degrees right. the hand is a little distracting and you can cut the ear.

    Sunset

          2
    the colours are very nice and warm, but did you use a tripod. if not you should have-the light comes out better and the sea line is straight. my suggestion to imrove the composition is to cut so that either the sky is 1/3 of the image or the other way around -the sea is 1/3 (cutting the sea is probably better) :))
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