I agree the composition is heavy in the front 2/3's of the image but if this is to be an advertisement for someone ample space behind her. If it were in front it would appear as thought she was pushing it out of the way with her stomach. I like the lighting but while there is great detail in the dress, there would be more if you toned the brightest section of the dress down by 1/2 to 3/4 of a fstop in photoshop. The detail appears to be there but is slightly washed out. I love taking 3D objects and try to make them as 3D as possible utilizing a 2D printable medium. While there are some of those qualities there, I still feel very 2D while looking at it. I get a silhouette feeling from it specially from the angle of the face and the lighting of the hair. I do like the motion/flow of the arms and the overall composition.
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I agree the composition is heavy in the front 2/3's of the image but if this is to be an advertisement for someone ample space behind her. If it were in front it would appear as thought she was pushing it out of the way with her stomach.
I like the lighting but while there is great detail in the dress, there would be more if you toned the brightest section of the dress down by 1/2 to 3/4 of a fstop in photoshop. The detail appears to be there but is slightly washed out.
I love taking 3D objects and try to make them as 3D as possible utilizing a 2D printable medium. While there are some of those qualities there, I still feel very 2D while looking at it. I get a silhouette feeling from it specially from the angle of the face and the lighting of the hair.
I do like the motion/flow of the arms and the overall composition.