this shot is a bit questionable for me. i can see your idea, but im not too fond of the actual shot, though i agree that the idea may be a bit hard to pull off well.
just a few things, the one-lip showing doesnt work for me, kind of makes it look like she's sucking on the bench. that her thumbs are not aligned is a bit distracting for me. the image also looks tilted - the bench doesnt seem to line up to the brick wall in the background, so this may be impossible to correct.
Brooke Strauss, a model beggining her career in Philadelphia.
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beggining her career, eh? :)
this shot is a bit questionable for me. i can see your idea, but im not too fond of the actual shot, though i agree that the idea may be a bit hard to pull off well.
just a few things, the one-lip showing doesnt work for me, kind of makes it look like she's sucking on the bench. that her thumbs are not aligned is a bit distracting for me. the image also looks tilted - the bench doesnt seem to line up to the brick wall in the background, so this may be impossible to correct.
love your work, and keep at it.