david.seaton

Excellent shot.

My one criticism is the reflection of the chain link in the water.

what focal length? did you use a polorizer (sky on the left looks much lighter than sky on the right)? it looks very sunny--how did you deal with the contrast? flash?

in contrast to other raters, I like the shallow depth of field!

nice work. I love pacific coast waterfalls (none of mine are up--yet--from a CA trip this summer) my only peice of advice would e to use a longer shutter time, I personally like less detail in the water and the most "ghosty" look that 5 sec. or so gives. This and the others in your gallery are very nice composition wise (its always hard to find that perfect bend in the river ;)).

Regards,

dave

Jan,

I feel like this is your best picture posted to date. This is almost good enough to be sold as a stock photo. I like the mood this casts: a dim, fancy bar. Minor things...

a) the crease in the table cloth bothers me. Maybe pull it taught and put weights on it outside of the view of the shot?

b) I think a larger height difference between the rims of the glasses would be good, like by moving green forward and red backwards.

Any comments welcome. Specifically, I had issues with rotating

(originally was tilted due to weird footing). Is it "too" rotated?

does it seem to be "falling" off the hill? Thanks

Hey

First photo I've uploaded. Any ideas? Technical or artistic input

welcome.

-DS