j.lewis.photo

Looks Good. Why did you arrange the colors in the way that you did? It seems like they could be arranged differently in a way that would move your eye through the image. Like placing the warmer color in a line through the image? It's a great shot either way, very impactful and three dimensional.

Please Critique, Thanks.

For a personal/school project on consumerism. Critique is more than

welcome.

This image is the first part of a series I'm doing for a school

project on consumerism. Any critique is appreciated.

 

 

Thanks

I love the gradation, and the bright front face. Just looking at the thumbnail I could tell this was a fun, happy image. Kind of has an idealistic all-american look to it, or maybe thats just me. I think the jet stream and the clouds adds to this feeling, and the angle of the jet stream compliments the top front edge of the building all to perfectly. I'm struggling to find criticism, maybe darken the bottom of the frame slightly.

Expressive portrait was the goal.

This image was shot digitally, but has not received any manipulation

yet. The original file has much more saturation, and the background

is much more green. I couldn't get it to look good for the web

though, so sorry. Thanks for any comments/critique. One person said

that it was difficult to see that the dial is spinning, is that true

for anyone else?

Nice image, can I ask why you took it in color?