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I wonder if there is a sleep paralysis theme in this or not, but thats what drew my attention to the photo. The flipped standing-laying position with mirrors build very disoriented athmosphere.

I wanted to try to have some sort of intimacy in the photo of jumping

horse. Commets welcome.

Comments welcome

I don't usually do repetitive frames, but thought it would give this

subject a twist.

 

C & C welcome.

I understand that there might have not been too much freedom on choosing where you set your self on the building to compose a shot. It would have been nice if the lower left corner window would have been a bit more off from the left edge.

 

There is a nice repetition on how the building is presented: you can feel that you are on a dune, similar to those two further away. Same kind of pattern is repeated with the windows: an array and then an individual one closer by.

 

The man's reflection in the closest wndow is an interesting detail.

I find it amazing how much difference there is between the larger and default version of your photos ere in general. The details come much more meaningful in the larger version.

 

I really like the colours and how you managed to capture the potentially harsh light. Maybe it is the reflection from her knees that sothens it out in critical spots. The vivid colours are very nice as well as the dark over all tone during aptured in na bright day.

 

My favourite part however is how her direction of view and hand extended to go along with it lead y eye to the fine texture of stones uder water.

 

Maybe a few ripples from her hand touching the water vould have been nice?

The white balance is intentionally bit off in this one to have colder

look to this harbour. Does the motion blur in the ship ruin the photo?

 

Please, tell me what you think!

Playing with dof in this one to capture the dreamy athmosphere and

unique light.

 

Critiques welcome!

Comments welcome!

First I was put off a bit by the dull colours and composition being in the middle of the photo. Larger vesion, viewed from a distance that you can see the details in the sand, twigs and water drops gave a whole different experience though. There is distinct feeling (that is emphasized by the older movie like colours) of being in tight bunker, waiting for the (russian) soldiers to crawl from the treeline.

 

Perhaps this would still work better if the photo would be a bit wider?

For a brief moment the chill air was filled with small snow flakes

that were emphasized by bright noon sun.

 

What do you think of this?

I think I have tried to photograph this tree before. The two

connecting trunks are attractive subject, but too tight crop loses the

context and too wide crop loses the focus. Now I think that I got some

balance to the framing...

 

What do you think?

The green vs. red tones are nice, but the layout would need dynamics.

First, I'm not sure what would be the best category for this shot, but

maybe the documantery is ok.

 

This shot of from very cold and windy night at local harbour (the

moist cold air froze my shutter eventually). I wanted to emphasize the

(big) crane being "alone" in extreme weather and left a lot of space

around the machine. Now as I return to this shot I'm a bit unsure if

the compsition makes the crane just look small and the nature less fierce?

 

What do you think of the cropping and the shot in general?

In this photo I like the fact that there are more rocks visible around the stream (compared to the other long stream exposure). I would imagine this photo suffers from bring resized for screen use and would work very well as large print.

I like photos that convey other worldy or unreal athmosphere. Here I really like how the brighest lines on the stream look, and how they separate from the surrounding rocks and bring out the scare light that the scene has (the photo works the best in the larger version).

 

What I would like would have been a bit looser crop from the bottom to reveal a bit more of the foggy stream (now a triangle formed by the left and rightmost streams looks like it is cut off from the tip).

 

Good job on spotting and making this shot.

Even as I generally like the athmosphere I managed to capture here I must admit I'm bit unsecure with the cropping this photo (as well as many others ...). I would not want to cut the reflection, but wanted to avoid the central symmetry as well. Maybe a differently oriented photo would have been better, but I really liked the reflection and dark water.

Well, luckily I tried different framings of this photo, lets see if I manage to attach different versions to this post...

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Minor desaturation applied when converting raw, generally the weather

was juct extremely dull.

 

Critique welcome.

How does this photo of snowy embankment work for you?

An experience to use pinhole "lens" to capture human figure (something

that is not the most evident subject for pinhole due to long

exposures). Intention was to render bikini model more abstract but

still keep the gestalt recognizable.