christait

Hey Danny, Just wanted to say that I enjoy this look. It's got a dark, harsh feel from the sharpness in the bricks and shadows, accentuated by a little desaturation. To really drive it home, I would have suggested some more light on the lighted eye without losing the deep shadow on the right to capture a sharp stare from the model, giving it just a touch more emotional direction. Keep it up. -CT

There are a lot of great things going on in this one, but the tone makes it in the end. Any tips for the rest of us when shooting low key?

Cheers.

This is a very nice shot. I like the colour in the sky, the starburst coming into the shadow of the building (which is perfectly exposed: just enough to even out the emphasis on shape and detail), I even like the lower set of wires. I would make a decision about the top wires, though. If you have anything more above that, I want to see it. If not, I'd take them right out to get more emphasis on the building's shape. Again, great colour! Cheers,

 

Chris T