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    3x3

          3

    This is a great picture - I love it!!!

     

    the only thing I would perhaps change: have you tried straightening the vertical line a bit, esp. visible on the right side?

     

    Cheers, Achim

    domenica piovosa

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    I really like this picture.

    The only thing that disturbs me a bit is the small barrel distortion; my eyes are always distracted by the slight curvature of the steps. I would straighten this a bit.

     

    Cheers,

     

    Achim

    By the river II

          8

    The picture is nice, but there's a lot of white space in the picture.

    Have you tried getting more detail out of the cloud cover?

    What about cropping the sky a bit?

     

    Cheers,

     

    Achim

  1. This is a great photo!

    I like the positioning of the girl on the right side of the frame so that she is looking at something outside of the picture. Though the picture is very simple in its composition, I think it is this feature that makes the photo so interesting. Had you placed her on the other side, it would be a rather boring photo.

    The Four Sisters

          10

    Really nice shot, I like it; esp. the sky with its gradual change from light to dark blue.

     

    I was wondering, have you tried cropping the right side, i.e., placing the trees closerto the border of the picture?

     

    Cheers,

     

    Achim

  2. You have these two groups of trees to the right & the middle of the picture, and then this void in the foreground on the left. I would try cropping from the left to make the picture more symmetrical.

    Untitled

          6

    Very nice picture.

     

    If I were consider cropping, I'd try the left side, shorten this long dark, somewhat boring, triangle a bit. The really interesting parts of the picture are all on the right side.

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