allen_r1

original portrait

I think you've nailed it. This is a great shot. And regarding the last comment, I like the tight crop. My only minor criticism is I think I would like a sharper focus on her arm. Well done!

Nice shot...excellent lighting.

Nice shot! The eyes convey a lot in this photo.

Nice composition

The focus may not be perfect but this is a very nice portrait just as it is. Regards.

Nice shot!

Nice shot

Love the eyes...they really draw you into the photograph.

Nice capture

Very nice!

Nice shot!

Nice concept...traditional but not boring...demure yet sexy. Well done!

Nice shot.

Great composition!

Great shot. The perspective and composition is perfect (rule of thirds both vertically and horizontally)...vibrant  color which fits the content. Well done.

I love this shot. Perfect composition.

Nice shot!

I disagree with the previous post. I like how she is framed within the photo. That is what makes this image stand out. And since you did a good job of making sure she is the only thing in focus, they are not "distracting" at all.

Great composition. My only problem is the image is a bit flat (a common problem with digital conversion to BW).

I agree with Catherine. The original is far better.

This is really nice but I'd like to see a tighter crop at the bottom and a bit more space above the line of the lake incorporating the rule of thirds. Currently the lake cuts the image in half which I think is a less effective composition.

Very nice!

The color seems somewhat desaturated but otherwise, this is an outstanding image.

Great shot!