josephski

thia is a very thoughtful pic; there are questions like is she running away from something, a feeling? a person? a matter?

and what about us the reader? do we worry about a train appear at the far end? is she cold in these leaveless Autumn or winter? what if her shoe get stuck on the rail.... many questions... that's the success of this portrait.

I think the triangle thingy is not important, though I know it's coming from traditional oil paintings, I think to make the whole pic harmonise and the poser be as natural as possible is more important; see the pressing down on the left fingers, and the uneasy pose of the left leg? ( I feel threatening by the left leg )

May be I see ways is different?

wow!

I wish I can put calligraphy on the sky --- like some of my brush painting.

I am sorry Rob I am not good with words, I said that is because I have been practising and teach thingys for a long time, so probably I see footwork differently. I wich I can explain if only I was there...

Anyway, if you let me try:

like the left foot was almost covering the thigh and perpendicularly link the head with a similar shape of hair, and perhaps a bit too unnatural and uncomfortable?? may be I m wrong completely.