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jayme wier

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    Untitled

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    I love the tones of this picture. I think there is too much space where the lattice shows behind. It feels like the picture drops off into a hole. But her expression and the high key is very romantic.

    Wedding smile

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    I agree that the foreground detracts from the bold statement. What about cropping it. I have two options- see what you think. I do love the impact the lighting on their faces has. I would love it if I were them.

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    The Triple Jump

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    The crop makes the pictures and gives more to the triple jump. It lets the eye notice the smoothness of the sand that is about to be destroyed! I also love the girl in the background shading her eyes. It makes it look like he's jumping that much further.

    Untitled

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    It may be the fold of the dress but it looks like the bride's bra is showing. I don't know how staged this was but it might have been worth the time to fix the dress. If it was shot in the moment their's not much you can do. At this point, maybe cropping it close to their heads to save the intimacy of the moment would help. Just some thoughts...
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