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gdenyer

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    Aurora Australis

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    Thanks Daniel & Emmanuel

    Conversion performed using Lightroom 3.  In the original the ship is bright orange and the because of the overcast conditions the image looked quite flat. I liked the perspective on the ship and the solitary figure, but it didn't look particularly dramatic in colour.

    The whole frame has been darkened by nearly 2 stops, and then the ship masked and lifted back up to about +0.25 - which is why the name is so prominent. I fiddled with the name thinking it was maybe too stark but in the end decided it was more dramatic and drew me into the picture. Was still unsure though - so glad you don't think it is too much.

    Brightness & contrast increased across the frame and filtered blues/magenta up, red/yellow/orange/green down.

    Agree re the antenna.

    In the full size version the masking still needs some work.

    Thanks for the comments. :)

     

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    Technically I think this is beautiful, although maybe you could have included the tip of his elbow. Regarding interpretation, I do perceive the 'darkness' in the photo that some others have mentioned. Whether or not it was intentional, I personally I think it is what makes this an interesting and truly artistic photo, and not just another 'Hallmark moment'. It shows a beautiful tender moment... or does it? Well done.
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