mark from thailand

Lovely.  Love the lighting, composition & the floating is very special, as others have said

Love this composition.

 

However, I thought it was a little under-exposed & dark in some areas?

This is my favorite of the sequence.  Great lighting, perfect exposure, lovely model with great figure and perfect skin, great composition.

 

Two small suggestions:  What would it look like if she was looking at the camera?  Also, pointing one of her toes down, rather than flat footed in the sand?

Love the eyes of this lovely model and the pose is very complimentary, with great lighting.  Only (very slight) criticism is the legs merge into each other.  A little more light to highlight the front leg would be great I think.

She doesn't look too comfortable to me, so this is not to the usual outstanding quality I love from your pictures John, for me.

Wonderful pose, contrast, lighting & colours.  The cream of the wall, the texture of the wall v her smooth body & the green of the bushes - all work perfectly!

Great moment/pose captured in wonderful light. Only minor thing is I find the lighter patch top left corner slightly distracting & might darken it slightly?

Any comments or suggestions?

Comments or suggestions very welcome please

Any comments/suggestions very welcome

Lovely colours! Only (v minor) criticism might be the shed looks a touch underexposed?

Paulo,

Great pose & she's very pretty. Only problem is I find the sofa in the background distracting. Maybe a wider aperture/smaller depth of field?

She is pretty but I am not sure of 'hidden shots' unless personal danger & public interest is involved? Smacks of voyeurism to me? Why not ask for permission - she'd be flattered probably?

Great photo - lots of atmosphere & they are sleeping so peacefully!

 

Only question I have is should the top 1/3rd be cropped, to focus on the sleepers & the lighting contrast?

Any suggestions to help me improve guys & girls?

I'd welcome any comments on good, bad or ugly on this, to help me

improve my photographic skills.

 

This is a simple panorama, created from 2 photos & joined in

Photoshop - nothing fancy

LOVE the framing & the colours & contrast. Pity about the curtain though - a little distracting

Love it! Love the exposure. Maybe only thing I'd do would be to tidy up the hair behind the ears a little?

Focus is good but dark area distracting