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Emily,

I'm drawn in by the soft colors and backligth washing out the image on the left. Your model & styling fit in perfectly too. I do however feel that this could be even better with a different, more engaging / 3d lookin pose [if that makes sense?]

Thanks for sharing!

 

 

Hi Garrick,

I really like the make up & expression of your model; your lighting enhances it well. I do however feel that the ps work to the background distracts. Nice image!

Would like to know what other possibilities yoou fellow photographers

think of when you see this. I like this concept a lot, and would like

to deviate/expand on it. Thanks

Beautiful girl, I don't mind the colors, but the blown out highlights, shadow in the background (+it's texture!) and unfotunate cropping make it lack the peace that would suit her expression perfectly.

I do feel the same when looking at this. You have a good eye! Despite the hotspot on his t-shirt I really think the presence of the guy in the background adds to the mood (she looks even more isolated). That's different with the guy up front on the left, but since you can hardly see his face I don't think it really matters.

You did a good job on the exposure. The light on her face is nice and soft, like the light from the window bounced of the paper..

The pen looks a bit out of place and tilting the image just a little so the windowframes are vertical might do the peaceful look good.

 

I like it.