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elwin_estle

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    desert

          2
    What the heck is it?? Seems like just a big expanse of white with a few uninteresting bits over at the right edge. I am afraid I just don't "get" it.
  1. I like the soft lighting. The shape in the lower right corner bothers me and I think I would have liked the left edge cropped a bit more. The pose seems just a bit awkward to me.

    Another alien!!!

          2
    Not perhaps the most original, but very humourous. I kind of like it. I wish his hair wasn't chopped off at the tope and the background kind of bothers me. I also think this shot would work better as a black and white.

    Cierra 2

          6
    Agree about the crop, could have been tighter, but love the expression. This is one of the better baby pictures I have seen on this site.
  2. I like the idea. The grey highlight in the upper left corner bothers me a bit. I also kind of wish the color in the flower was maybe a bit more understated. Cropping on the right edge seems maybe a bit too tight.
  3. I like the color and the simplicity of the composition. I kind of wonder how it would look as more of a horizontal with the top and bottom cropped tighter, not so tight as to lose too much of the fabric at the bottom, though.

    The car

          5
    I like the wideness. The cropping bothers me a little. I sort of wish for a bit more at the bottom and right edges of the frame. Still this is a fun shot. It conveys the sort of voluptuous BIGness of cars from this era.

    Food for thought

          5
    Reminds me of Diana Ross and the Supremes. Ya got your lead onion out in front, and your backup onions...well....in the back... You just need some little microphone stands, hehe. Mebbe some sequined dresses.
  4. I like it, but there are a couple of things that bother me, mostly with the lighting. Over on the left, your lighging is very soft, almost like an old master's painting. But on the right, there are a number of harsh shadows and hot spots. Also, I wonder what would have happened if you had painted with a very low value, soft light, around and possibly behind the bowl.

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    TAMI IN B/W

          28
    I disagree about the frame around the picture. I wish the picture frame on the wall behind her was gone. I like the soft quality of this and the facial expression. I would second the motion for a tighter crop.
  5. Well composed. Not, in my opinion, particularly original. I kind of wish all the flower was visible at the left, but you probably would have had to rearrange your items so as to balance your composition. If I were a greeting card publisher, I would definitely consider this image.

    Fall Road

          3
    It is a pretty, and very restful scene. I like the composition. This scenic "road through the trees" thing has been done a lot, the fall colors make this one a little better than most. Wish it were bigger.

    cyclorange

          22
    I can't tell if this is a manipulation or not, and that is the best way. This is a very strong image. Good composition and sense of dynamism. Might have cropped the left edge a bit. 6/6
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