watermarkhouse

December 18, 2013

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November 17, 2013

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November 16, 2013

Hello, Andrew.

Pretty nice image, altough I would change a couple of things here. First of all, instead of sepia, I'd rather use the b&w colouring, that would give the picture more dramatic look. The strong point of this photo may also be change a bit upwards, making the eye in the crossing of two/thirds lines. And maybe a bit darker background, so the main object would come up more emphatically.

That's what I was asking for many times here, so now I just put it here myself, as a template.

This is my like 7th or 8th request for a critique, and out of that just once I have the response (sorry, just checked - twice at this same picture, thank you Tim and Waldemar). Why the photo.net is trying to convince people to contribute, to have a possibility to request an unlimited number of critiques? For me, it looks like a closed circle for well-known-each-other photographers here. As I'm new - I get an empty spaces.