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    Bugatti

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    It would be nice if more design/body info are captured in the shot. It has a lot under its hood; but does not carry a long cruise range. Definitely not a get-away car candidate. Cops will soon catch up with you when you realize you have run out of gas!
  1. You have done a good job in bringing impressive contrast out for your image. Be cognizant of the use of straight lines and contours to achieve better visual balance. Have you thought about bring more detail to the far right? Or, tilt the image a little more clockwise? Good luck!

    Cucumber Falls

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    I am impressed with the presentation of a rather reserved or subdued fall taken from a good angle. Even the tree branches obstructing part of the view didn't bother me that much. The ONLY thing though, I think you would have gotten more stablized results if the camera was mounted on a Gitzo. Ha, just kidding...

    Maggie

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    Since you have labeled this as a portraiture (as versus fashion) you may wish to take a downward shot (lift the camera) and bring the facial more into focus. Ask the model to be less serious, relax a little. Don't crop too tight. The high key background is O.K. Have fun!
  2. Jim, this image has enough detail to qualify as good work. Tilted head and the angle of the lens made the composition very nice. The shade part still looks OK without the need for fill lighting, it adds depth to the head shot. The only adjustment that I probably would do is to crop a little more tighter at the bottom. Personal preference, anyway......

    Gondolas

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    You have demonstrated a high level of competency in using the particular camera you have. I am very impressed with the results of your efforts. For this particular picture, did you use any kind of gradual filter to enhance the image? Best wishes.
  3. With the objects in the image quite recognizable you really need to request a release from the couple. Whether you intend to use this shot of yours for self-promotion or for commercial gain, or even for charity, you need their joint consent. It's not too late, if you can track them down. Good luck.
  4. Congratulations. I enjoyed much of every picture in your portfolio. Colors are unbelievable. Your using of the Tiffen 81B filter inspired me. I thought the type of vivid colors could only be achieved via Lee's color enhancing glass. Your choice is good and less expensive! Did you by any chance used a color meter in these pictures?

    Untitled

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    From his portfolio, the photographer had not only successfully demonstrated he's an excellent technician, but showed us he's an outstanding artist as well.

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    I enjoyed your folder very much. It appears you have excellent skills in mastering the control of exposure which adds poetic effects to your pictures.

    Untitled

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    Since this is not a frontal shot, i.e., the lion is looking into the camera, so you probably don't want to crop the image so narrowly. For a side image like this one, try extend the vertical length of the image so we can see more of the object....

    hand (nude)

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    Under ambient lighting the photographer achieved more or less the best one can. We would like to see a little more clearer detail of the hand which was a very powerful pose. Had this image were taken in a studio setting, you can really dramatize the image in many different ways. Good job!
  5. This is a good shot. If I were taking this image, I would probably take either one of the following approaches: have her do the same pose but reduce the shaded part of the face to no more than half, or, keep the same amount of the shade but have her keep her eyes open looking toward the camera so I may be able to grab some light reflection out of her right eye. This is subjective, anyways.....
  6. Using this photo to convince your viewer that she's "lost in thought..." will be a tough sell. Here you have two basic senarios: to introduce more ocean backdrop or to include more (or clearer) people in the background so she became relatively "lost." The expression of "lost" is a very challenging one for photographers. Good luck.
  7. Chris, for general purposes this is a good shot. If you like to achieve the pro effect then you do need more lighting and color filter(s) to enhance the sunset! Even then you may still want to run the shot thru the polaroid test. Good luck.
  8. Since you did not specify whether you have used special effect filters, such as: sunrise, stripe, etc., I assume none was used here. The tone of the image suggests this is a very distant sunrise. I think if you used a gradual sunrise filter to infuse more layers of red over the background sky, or use a red strip to put a layer of "redness" immediately over the water you might have gotten a sunrise effect that most of us are accustomed to. Good luck.
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