jerry_pommer

Oops... I deliberately removed the hair. I apologize for taking such liberty with your photo. And yes, it is just my opinion... last time I checked that wouldn't even get me a cup of coffee...

:-)

Nice shiny highlights on top, good depth of field. I find the black horizon bothersome, and it looks underexposed by about 1-1.5 stop. Maybe the camera's meter was fooled by the white surface? Here's my take on it. I hope you don't mind.

Need comments please... could it be improved? Looking for lighting and

posing tips. Thanks!

Can't make up my mind now... here's the sharper, contrastier version.

What do you think? I usually like to produce sharper images with more

contrast, but I like the soft "feel" of this one. Comments appreciated!

Here's a version with more contrast. I found the original really flat.

Suggestions?