josephwalsh

Beautiful model, nicely posed and lit.

I like the post production you treatment you've given.

It is back focused, however, would prefer focus on the near rather than the far eye.

Agfa APX 100

orange filter

seductive and well done..

would be more so if she tipped her head down a bit...I would prefer to look more into her eyes and less up her nose.

Light and tonality are appealing.

Pose strikes me as awkward and contrived.

This is electronic collage.

Not photography.

to me it's like two separate photographs.

Camel sil. on left is less effective than one on right anyway. So, I believe cropping out left camel and human leaves a more effective photo---the sun, one human figure, one camel.

And what remains is superb.

"I respect your opinion but I happen to disagree."

OK :-)

Model has a pretty face that is appropriate to the image.

Warm color cast is a nice choice but I feel is overdone.

Her left leg looks painfully compressed .

Multiple fleshy folds at abdomen are too much.

Eliminate the grass stalks cutting in front of her knee/leg/breast.

Nicely backlit.

Good work.