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aediaz

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    On the rush !

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    I tried to focus on the boxes. To make them the focal point. The blurr

    is a product of longer exposure required by the overcast sky.

    Thanks for visiting.

    Untitled

          4
    Very nice composition. May I suggest a larger aperture, 'layering' the composition in a way that the viewer would know what your focal point is for this pic. I believe you would get a more dramatic effect with the handrail. Congrats.

    Squid Boats 4

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    Is it me, or there is some grain in the pic? . Did you try with a lower ISO and longer exposure?, perhaps that could do the trick. Besides that, lovely colors and atmosphere.

    Black Velvet

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    you have managed to keep the details while giving it the 'artistic' edge. I believe it came out very nice. Fluid and graceful. Keep it up.

    Looking out

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    You focused on the index finger nail. Not the best feature for a portrait. Maybe some more of the model's profile ( maybe a sad look, or an evocative look ) could have helped a photo that has no story to tell. Take care

    Untitled

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    Well, I think you have no problem with cropping, my friend.

    This is as good as it gets.

    I Take it you didn't want to remove the corner in the upper right to not chop off her fingers.

    Nice texture also.

     

    Congrats.

     

    andres

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