c4-contemporary-art

wow.... SOOOO banal..!!!

I quite enjoy the tension in this shot between the clearly staged/mounted display - and the nearly sub- liminal perception of a natural scene with numbers floating alongside. umm... know what I mean??

 

I am so impressed with your work overall. What it lacks in coherence as a body - it more than makes up for with the occasional shot that really opens your mind...! Thank you, Leslie.

though I MUST confess I was less impressed once I realized it wasn't an elaborate enlarger photomontage/photogram. Its WILD looking if you don't know what it is, though... nice..! PUSH IT. More!!! I encourage it...! thanks.

I'd like to add a critique for you - but I really have no idea what your intention was. So I'm really NOT sure how to respond! Expecially something that looks so candid and from-the-hip.

I don't know if it's fair to submit paid work in this forum - but I thought it was

a nice image - considering it's commercial work. I just wanted to share it. I

like the quality of light and find it somewhat meditative.

In case you don't know her work - I'd HIGHLY recommend you look at FRANCESCA WOODMAN'S work. Just google the name. There are a few monographs on her work available - this reminds me a bit of her... thanks!

Hi - this is just some commercial work I've done. I don't really value it all that highly - certainly not as art as the way that I see it. Who knows... maybe you can coax me to put some of my personal work on here one day...!

But I DO kind of like this image, which is why I'm posting it (not that that is the BEST reason to post a critique image!!)

 

Jonathan

Hi - this is just some commercial work I've done. I don't really value it all that highly - certainly not as art as the way that I see it. Who knows... maybe you can coax me to put some of my personal work on here one day...!

But I DO kind of like this image, which is why I'm posting it (not that that is the BEST reason to post a critique image!!)

 

Jonathan