marcus_kreidl

June 25, 2006

The roses have a nice flowing texture to them. I would try using a white backround to give a more airy feel. The black just seems a little too imposing in context with the subject.

June 25, 2006

Nice street shot. It reminds me of the photographs of Gary Winogrand with the tilted frame.

June 25, 2006

I think the black and white looks kind of dull. if you used photoshop try using monochrome chanel mixer and experiment with the amount of RGB levels. it simulates color response of b&w film for a more natural look than simply desaturating the color.

June 22, 2006

I like how the trees around the edges make a circle around the two palms which are also circles. cool

June 21, 2006

I find the excessive vignetting to be unnecessary, considering the crop of the picture. This just ruins the picture for me. Excellent expression on the boy's face though.

June 21, 2006

I like the composition a lot. My only complaint is the color. See below.

June 21, 2006

The croping and composition is ok. I would stay away from the unsaturated color. It takes away from the beauty making her face look gaunt. I would use a strong sepia tone and use a s-cure to enhace the contrast.

June 21, 2006

Certainly very interesting facade. Almost surrealistic. The black on the to confuses me though. Is it taken at night or is there something blocking the backround? A wider crop showing more of the surrounding would help give a better sense of place to this picture. Very interesting otherwise...

June 21, 2006

Excellent capture with adequate dof. the vignetting in the corners bothers me a little. An increas in green/yellow and red saturation would help also.

November 30, 2005

Great lighting and tone. I would give more room around the dolphins because it seem restricted and doesn't flow as well. good work

November 30, 2005

the stare down is definitly a good concept. but I think seeing the two subjects in profile looking at each other would be more effective. Also give the tone some punch with constrast and saturation

August 27, 2005

Interesting capture of the hummingbirds behavior! I would like to know though what was the shutter set at to nearly freeze frame the hummingbird's wings?

May 30, 2005

This photo reassures me that someone knows what street photography.

January 29, 2005

Very nice picture. i like how the building in the upper right is slightly faded. the grain on the tri-x comes out nicely. the only thing that bothers me is the vertical lines of the builings aren't quite parallel due to the wide angle lens distortion.

December 24, 2004

Simply quite stunning composition and color

December 24, 2004

excellent use of the slighly muted colors. conveys mood well. nice job

December 24, 2004

you definitly capture that vintage feel. the Deltat 3200 iso may have been overkill when you could have gotten that classic grain with Kodak tri-x

December 24, 2004

Very nice tonal values. Look like those of Anne Geddes'. I think the text in unnecessary and you could fill the frame more with your subject. Nice star thought! good luck

December 24, 2004

I like the composition very much and the color. His face isn't quite focused / lacking sharpness. I could be the camera.

December 24, 2004

the Reflection of the light is really nice.

December 24, 2004

Colors on this are fabulous! Lighting is phenomenal! Great work. I don't care for the border though. Try evenly spaced on Left, right, and top, and then considerably wider on the bottom.

November 13, 2004

Wonderful shot. I like the colors. Well done. I would have moved back just a little bit to get the sidwalk in fron of the store and the top of the sign.

October 9, 2004

I really like this shot. Getting stop action shots in the perfect moment like this is tough. Everyting ties in real nicely between the subject and the players in the backround.