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llorton

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    Zoé (5)

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    sharp enough and reasonably well composed but the kerchief is much brighter than her face (which seems a bit low contrast and dark) and thus draws my eye.

    Sad girl

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    What can one say about this essentially perfect, imo, shot. Even the title is superfluous.

    Every little bit of the image contributes to the story.

    I certainly wish I had taken it.

     

  1. This seemed to epitomize the Native American life in the US. A strong

    adherence to traditional ways of construction and decoration

    (materials and door decoration), an equally ardent patriotism to the

    US and a spiritual component to their life (represented by the

    reflection in the window)

    Untitled

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    IMO, although it is quite lovely as part of an album, there are a couple of things that could be improved on this shot.

     

    There's a lot of sky - and it's sort of boring - and the horizon cuts the image right in half

    The lower left margin is crowding her feet and cutting off her shadow.

     

    Minor points.

     

    There is a tilt to the horizon which disconcerts the eye.

    If you are in US or Canada a 4 x 6 aspect ratio is much more expensive to frame and I think it is an awkward aspect ratio for a photo of a person.

    It xould use a little vignetting to push the eye towards the center

     

     

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