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Lovely portrait...good composition with subtle colors. Only critical distraction is 'bleeding' of the background on the right shoulder of your model...but I do like the choice of color....some how it blends well with her striking features.

I like the overall warm tones and diagonal composition of water line. Good work....may be experiment more with placement of 'rocks' more strategicaly by moving around a bit....could be challenging but may be worth your while 

Mixture of fog and tinted sun rays...your thoughts?

Your comments?

Mother ship underway for a three day fishing expedition. HDR of RAW

converted to JPEG

North coast of British Columbia (unusually calm waters) while heading

to Hecate Strait. HDR with RAW converted to JPEG.

Good work. I like the polarized sky, granite and snow color contrast. Rest of your portfolio is a good slice of life in rural Pakistan.

 

Cheers

Alberta Oilsand mines are famous for their size and operation. This

photographs was taken on a bright summer day depicting tiny humans

who operate a giant of a machine called The Dragline. This mining

machine is so large I could not fit the machine in frame with my

28mm wide angle lens, instead I decided to include the operating

crew on the roof top (middle right of frame) and barely managed to

get part of the boom and hoist ropes in frame. Any comments are

welcome and thanks for looking.

Good work.....I like your style, very pleasant upscale and clean unclutred photography.

 

 

Cheers.

 

 

his right arm merged with her left arm...making one long arm....distracting, other wise good image.

Excellent capture, I like the highlights (S shape is very pleasing), the shadows makes the image so much more interesting and I think that works just fine, since normaly we are all drawn to the highlights for interpretations. Is the image of a Dhaow? Typical of Kuwait?

 

Thanks for sharing.

Nice portrait, exhudes personality and charm.....I like the flaked/broken beak. The eyes are sharp and in focus.

Whenever I see your postings.....I am instantly transported to my native home grwoing up in rural Pakistan. Congrats for an amazing shot and thanks for the 'Time Portal'.

Certo:

Wow....I see the difference. The eyes do make the photograph much more appealing (if I may call my own creation a photograph without coming across a bit arogant!). Thanks for the input.

 

Cheers

Please comment.

 

Faisal

Thank you Paul and Certo for your comments. Paul: the curved line on her face is not string in fact its a strand of hair...I left it b/c I thought it would add to the image. Certo:Thanks for the encouraging words...I would like to see the sharpened image you attempted :-)

 

Faisal

Good capture, I like the pose...its very natural and poised. Just a little 'burn tool' mark near the hand holding the cup? causes a bit of distraction.

Okay this is a re-run without PS filtering. Please comment.

 

Thanks

Please comment on any impovements to the composition or lighting,

presentation etc. I look forward to your input.

From 'leading lines' to magical lighting and blending of hues....this image has all the makings of a great photograph. Congratulations...7/7. Thanks for sharing.

All the elements of a superb photograph. Excellent!

This is a very interesting portrait. The edges are blurry or out of focus (DOF) but overall the eyes are in focus and thats what draws my attention. Good use of photo software.

Nice warm tones, excellent mood with good composition. Since there is indication of haze behind the second cart, the third cart, clearly seen despite the haze, looks a little out of place. Other than that...excellent presentation.

other then the distortion at the tip of the blade, I like it. Try a little bit of burning (sky and clouds) and dodging (fuselage of the aircraft). Good work!

Schooling in photography? Who the hell goes to school to learn photography? It's like going to Universtiy of Anatomy to learn how to breath! Bob your work is exceptional....keep it up. You are definately in my list of interesting PN photographers.