janice_quist

August 6, 2004

I like the way you brought the flower toward the viewer using the maroon frame. The name and date are distracting, could they be black, instead?

August 3, 2004

We emerged from darkened galleries to see the sunshine flooding

through the skylight. It was particularly impressive since there had

been only rain for the previous two days.

August 3, 2004

The color of the bug is beautiful against the green and the leaf edges glow and cut through space. If you cropped it to the lower left you would maintain the strengths and get the bug out of the center.

July 30, 2004

I tried it without the jewelry and think it is better, too. Thanks.

July 30, 2004

Cropping into a square format makes the composition stronger. Here it is changed.

July 28, 2004

Critiques are appreciated.

July 23, 2004

Sorry, but I find it very hard to look at when it is so out of focus. Impressionistic paintings are not blurred, and are about light. I see very little influence of light in your photo.

July 23, 2004

Great dramatic effect with the blowout and good balance.

July 23, 2004

Light and charming. I know these nuanced changes can be tricky.

July 23, 2004

This was my favorite spot in England.

July 22, 2004

This softness makes it even more feminine than the usual flower image. I like it. Makes me think of printed fabric.

July 22, 2004

What do you think? Comments appriciated. Thanks.

July 20, 2004

Any critique messages will be appreciated.

July 20, 2004

Any comments will be appreciated.

July 19, 2004

It isn't often that so much green looks good. The soft greens are lovely here and also the textures from the planting.

July 19, 2004

Please comment.

July 19, 2004

Comments?

July 19, 2004

I think that this is a strong composition which needs those windows to work. The image is fasinating to me and is grabbing my attention for a long time.