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nagya

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    Untitled

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    I love the color, the treatment and the subjects. Excellent work. If I would change anything it's remove the lens flair on the right, it's distracting.

    DSC_0545

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    Nice job with the sun, but the brides eyes are closed. I would have had them stand to the right side of the tree in a natural pose. That way they are not dead center and you can crop in a little closer allowing you to eliminate some of the dead grass and extra background. Rule of thirds would have been nice here.

    Kira & Keith2

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    The setup is nice and the light looks good coming through the trees, but their skin tones aren't right. They should "pop" out of the image. If you would use a fill flash on their face you would have it all.

    Untitled

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    Great lighting, Love the moody effect. Wish she was all the way to the left of the frame (maybe), but other than that I think its great. Great model.

    Untitled

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    I really like this image, I love the expression and the exposure is great. I wish the banister was longer and end cap wasn't in the front of the frame, but that is in no way your fault. The only thing I wish you would have done differently was have her hand on the rail, it would have implied movement. Overall nice work, really great model.

    Untitled

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    Great portrait, but I think the hands need to be all the way in or all the way out. Love the work and the eyes and lighting just looks great! Good job!
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